I’ve laced my words with yearning,
I feel it so clearly.
You refuse to see,
As we set ourselves adrift.
Adrift – October 12, 2019
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I’ve laced my words with yearning,
I feel it so clearly.
You refuse to see,
As we set ourselves adrift.
DoRee MelNic 
Beautiful 🖤
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Thank you ♥️. Sometimes, it is what it is…
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I’m sure I’ve said it before – but you have such a beautiful lyrical style to your writing. I love it – even if I’m green with envy! 😉🖤
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*Blushing* that is so sweet of you to say ♥️. It’s funny how it is so easy to see in others what we’d like to be able to do ourselves…I love how your rhymability brings a bit of lightness to very deep and raw topics. Sometimes I feel like I’m just being plain old dreary. The proverbially rain cloud that follows you around, I hope that’s not me.
Anywho, keep sharing your amazing works. I enjoy them immensely ♥️!
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It really is funny, isn’t it?!
See, I think I just rhyme by numbers most of the time (and throw in the odd obscenity in to boot!) so I read wonderful poetry such as yours and am envious of your talents!!
You’re certainly not a rain cloud to me – a lot of the time you express what I feel in a way I never could.
Your writing – honed, honest and heart felt – is an inspiration to us all.
I look forward to reading them…
🖤🖤
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Thank you so much ☺️! I feel the same when I read your poetry. We seem to be all inter-tangled in some way, shape, or form. Learning from each other. Appreciating each other…take care tonight ♥️!
I just hope someday
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Lol…not sure why that last line was in the comment…but I do always hope someday…haha :).
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😂🖤
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