Just enough
To see
The movement
Forward
Never toggle
Too long
In one place
To let
It
Start seeping
Into
The depths
Of
Your
Heart
Brokenheartedness Among Us – May 11, 2020
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Grief Out Loud. Art. And Life.
Grief Out Loud. Art. And Life.
Just enough
To see
The movement
Forward
Never toggle
Too long
In one place
To let
It
Start seeping
Into
The depths
Of
Your
Heart
DoRee MelNic 
Absolutely fabulous poem! 😍 I can feel the beautiful emotions of words on my heart like a caress! ♥️♥️♥️
Thank you so much for sharing! 😘💕
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Thank you so much Ylenia ♥️
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🥰♥️♥️♥️😘🤗
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Nice🤗
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Thank you so much ❤️
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No no, never do that. Beautiful
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Always learning ♥️😊
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And thank you 😊
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Quite a purpose 😊🌺
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I guess it depends on where you want to go ♥️🤗
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Also how you feel at that moment of your life.
Anyway, it’s reminded me of the movie “Chocolat” starring Johnny Depp and Juliette Binoche. In it, the character of Juliette Binoche had the urge to keep moving before she could take root somewhere (her mother’s influence). I don’t know if you have seen it. Thank you for this reflections, Doree.
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Yes, the moment influences so much! I have not watched Chocolat. I do love Johnny Depp, I’ll give it ago…your last recommendation was fabulous ♥️. Thank you 😊
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It’s a very sweet story. I hope you like it 💚
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I meant “the urge to keep moving from one place to another…”.
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Gotcha, I feel that urge quite often…
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Poetry that described all the things that I did wrong in my life. Hanging on in one place that you already know is negative for you can be lethal.
Lovely poem
Best wishes from The Strong Traveller and have a great day
Do have a look at my blog whenever you find the time. There is some travel and lifestyle content which you may find interesting. Your thoughts will surely be very valuable. 🙂
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Thank you so much for stopping by ☁️☀️😊. I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem! You too have a wonderful day. I will definitely visit your blog, it does sound enticing 🤗
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Beautifully crafted! Sometimes our broken heart begs us to tread water because we want to stay away from the shore.
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Oh, that is true! Figuring out how to face the “shore” can be the most difficult part. Thank you for sharing, I love your thoughts ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Doree!
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Thank you so much Nathi ❤️
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It’s my pleasure! And hope you & your family are safe and well!
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Same to you and yours 😊
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