What quiets the soul
I’ve been searching
Smooth it
And gloss it over
She will brave through
Mercy
When It’s All Over – May 3, 2020
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Grief Out Loud. Art. And Life.
Grief Out Loud. Art. And Life.
What quiets the soul
I’ve been searching
Smooth it
And gloss it over
She will brave through
Mercy
DoRee MelNic 
Absolutely fabulous poem, I love so much it! ♥️ I see myself a lot in your wonderful words, they touched my heart like a caress 😘♥️♥️♥️
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It’s comment like these that make me want to keep sharing my soul , thank you ❤️
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I love so much your fabulous poems! Thank you so much from my heart for sharing your wonderful poems! 🥰🥰🥰♥️♥️♥️
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♥️♥️♥️
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Lovely and so gentle, Doree. Thank You. ❤️
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Thank you, Katy. I truly love to hear how it makes you feel ❤️
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My pleasure, Doree! 💕
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I love your poems Doree…sweet,simple and jst candid…Love:)
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Your words touched my heart, thank you ❤️
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It’s funny. Punctuation would’ve only hurt that poem…
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I struggle with punctuation,
“To punctuate, or not to punctuate”…
I have gone back and punctuated whole poems before just to then turn around and delete it all. I’ve succumbed to line breaks for pauses, with the occasional punctuation…lol…
I always enjoy your comments 😊
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Love your words Doree. They are very profound ❤️
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Thank you so very much.
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You are welcome Doree.
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