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Doree Grief, life, love, poetry September 6, 2020September 6, 2020 1 Minute

I ask and I ask

Your mouth stays shut

My tears flow

And nothing

Nothing from you

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Published September 6, 2020September 6, 2020

Halbarbera says:

September 6, 2020 at 5:58 pm

I think all the President’s wives and former squeezes said something similar!

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1. Doree says:
  
  September 6, 2020 at 6:05 pm
  
  That’s just sad 😕
  
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Yleniaely says:

September 6, 2020 at 6:05 pm

♥️♥️♥️

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American Daze Purple Haze says:

September 6, 2020 at 7:39 pm

Powerful emotion in a few words!

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1. Doree says:
  
  September 6, 2020 at 7:45 pm
  
  I’m glad you could feel it, thank you ♥️
  
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Roser says:

September 6, 2020 at 9:52 pm

It was painful, but very poetic! 🍃😊

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1. Doree says:
  
  September 6, 2020 at 11:23 pm
  
  😌 thank you ❤️
  
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bigskybuckeye says:

September 8, 2020 at 7:45 pm

Your poem reminds us that effective communication needs to travel both directions.

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1. Doree says:
  
  September 8, 2020 at 8:25 pm
  
  I’m glad that was something you took away from this piece 🤗
  
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masercot says:

September 14, 2020 at 9:16 am

Short and sweet!

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