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I do not know
No
I do not know your pain
I feel it close to my heart
But
I do not know your pain
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I’ve felt
Shrill sheets of energy
Shredding through my being
~~~
Back and forth
Back and forth
~~~
Until I couldn’t anymore
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I do not know your pain
But I feel it just the same
And for what it’s worth
It must be terrible
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Great poem — ‘Shrill sheets of energy’ powerful line.
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❤️ thank you Mich
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Beautiful lines and accompaniment too 🖤🖤🖤
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❤️❤️
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Beautiful
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❤️
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Excellent, Doree!
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Thank you, Susi! 🤗
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You are very welcome! 🙂
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Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
Empathy, sympathy, concern, it’s what makes us humane.
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Thank you so much for sharing ❤️🤗. Love your comment!
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It’s a pleasure! 🙂
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This is a wonderful piece, Doree! Thank you for following my blog. 😉
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Thank you so much! And hopefully (if I can muster up the gumption) one of these days I will challenge myself to one of your prompts. For now I will enjoy your blog. Thanks for the follow, too 🤗
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My pleasure, Doree. 😊
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