Pungent hits the ground
Running
Fleeing the scene
It has every right
To be here
After everything it’s seen
Feeling punches
Rolling round the crowd
All of us are talking
Way too fucking loud
Pungent hits the ground
Running
Fleeing the scene
It has every right
To be here
After everything it’s seen
Feeling punches
Rolling round the crowd
All of us are talking
Way too fucking loud
You did it again, Doree…
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I feel I should ask you exactly what it is I did again 😬?
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I read your poems and they are all competent… Competent is the baseline. When you go over that baseline, I tell you. But, at this point, I’m tempted to move the baseline.
I think every poem needs to end strong and this ended with a great couple of lines.
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WordPress is acting sick, I just replied to you a second time…and it started a new comment thread…it’s probably me.
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WordPress has reached sentience. Be careful and don’t make any sudden moves…
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I thought I replied…weird. 🤷♀️
Basically, I said thank you and I appreciate your candor very much.
♥️♥️♥️
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Absolutely magnificent poem!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you ❤️
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🥰♥️♥️♥️😘🤗
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