Hanging on like smoke
From nights past
Gritty and nasty
Rolling through the day
Hair pent up
And tangled
So many tangles
My fingers no longer twirling of boredom
Left in the nights before
As have you
But this smell
Does not wash out
I cannot rid it’s cling
Lingering in daydreams
Dirty and lost
Very emotional poem, wonderful!!! ♥️♥️♥️🤗
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❤️🤗 thank you
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😘😘♥️♥️♥️🤗🤗
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Very emotional lines! 💐👏🏼
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I’m so glad you felt them ❤️🤗. Thank you.
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Your metaphor was beautifully done. You must’ve done some planning for that one.
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Thanks, Charlie 🤗
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