
Sitting in the moon light
So I can see you
In it’s gaze
Laying down
And breathing in
Until it hurts
Releasing
The madness
Pouring out
Into a mist
All around us
Floating
Like bees in the dark
Leading the blind
And
Misplaced
It has always been me
You truly see
In the gaze
Of the shifting moon
Tonight
Floating / Like bees in the dark — great line.
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❤️ thank you!
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the gaze of the shifting moon…
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Thank you ❤️
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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeScKz_da37RKfdDKr4vPOQ
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Keep Faith took me into my own head, my own cell…tears. Thank you for sharing.
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I’ve run out of adjectives for your poems so I’ll just use “carbonized”…
… it’s the only adjective I had left…
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Nice, and I understand. Thank you :).
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Lovely feel
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So glad you enjoyed it 🥰
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You poetry, beautiful Doree…..is sooooo powerful. Beautiful. Streamlined. Amazing. I loved this. 💖💖💖!!!
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Thank you for your kind words! ❤️❤️❤️
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An unusual and mystical moonlight scene indeed.
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Most nights, the moon draws me in…
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The Moon is moving away from Earth at a rate of 3.8 centimeters (1.5 inches) per year, but the speed of its retreat has varied over time.
Someday there will be no Moon to draw us in because it will be so far away. But will all be far gone on that day!
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Aw, your comment has started my wheels spinning!
It reminded me of a little ditty I wrote back in April, Collide. I had just watched a show like NOVA or Cosmos that discussed the Giant-Impact hypothesis. With claims a planet named Theia collided with early Earth and a remnant of that collision formed our moon. It went on to later talk about another collision. One between the Earth and the Moon itself. I googled the heck out of it and found this article from Forbes…
https://www.forbes.com/sites/brucedorminey/2017/01/31/earth-and-moon-may-be-on-long-term-collision-course/?sh=18d91e5c50d6
Where a planetary scientist from Idaho, Jason Barnes, discusses the facts you stated about the moon slowly moving away from Earth and then goes on to say, “the Earth and Moon may be on a very long-term collision course…The final end-state of tidal evolution in the Earth-Moon system will indeed be the inspiral of the Moon and its subsequent collision and accretion onto Earth.”
Maybe, billions of years from now…it might be fair to say the moon ended up drawing us all in ;).
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Interesting and thought provoking information all:
“I feel like the moon is a very beautiful woman. She’s in control.” —Ravyn Lenae
“There are nights when the wolves are silent and only the moon howls.” —George Carlin
“Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” —Anton Chekhov
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Nice, my favorite quote is the last!!! ❤️
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😃🎡
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