I see the way you move
Smooth
With purpose
My eyes
Find you easy to watch
You are the husk
To the outer space
I no longer
Inhabit
My Mind – June 24, 2020
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Grief Out Loud. Art. And Life.
Grief Out Loud. Art. And Life.
I see the way you move
Smooth
With purpose
My eyes
Find you easy to watch
You are the husk
To the outer space
I no longer
Inhabit
DoRee MelNic 
Absolutely fascinating and magnificent poem, I love your words, touched my heart so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Hi Doree !
Take care
John
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Hi John! I hope all is well. 🥰
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That’s beautiful Doree. The husk that holds outer space together is such a beautiful analogy. I hope you are well.
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Thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed it 🥰. I’m alive, hope all is well with you too!
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Hey! You did it again!
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You are too kind, thank you. Here’s a little secret, I really have no idea what it is I’m doing. But maybe that’s the point. I so enjoy your comments!
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WOW!!! Doree!!! This is SOOOOO rockin’!!! Thank You and Cheers! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks, Katy ☺️🤗
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My pleasure!!! ❤️❤️❤️🤗😊
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Such a talented mind!
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You are too kind. Thank you 🤗❤️
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This is soooo goid Doree. Sorry I have been a sent. Been ill. But I have just enjoyed reading your last two poems ❤️
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I hope you are feeling better! Thank you for reading ❤️
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