I did not cry.
Nope, not the day she died,
Or at her funeral,
Or the service held at the house.
No, I did not cry,
During our final hug goodbye.
I did not cry.
But if I were given the chance,
One more opportunity,
I would humbly
Show her all my tears, and
Share with her my fears.
And while
We bathed in my sorrow,
A pain I could not have known
I would cry, and I would cry, and I would cry…
DoRee MelNic 
Jeez, do I feel this one or what?!
*dries eyes*
Your writing captures this sentiment so beautifully 🖤🖤
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Me too. Thank you so much for sharing your feelings! Writing definitely helps me work through feelings…
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Oh writing helps enormously … As does reading the words of others who understand 🖤
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Agreed, and that is why I love to read your pieces ❤️.
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Well that’s very kind…
But it’s definitely a mutual appreciation 🖤
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Thank you for sharing my piece, lifting me up, and hearing the depth of my love. You are a wonderful human being! Don’t ever stop doing what you do! Wonderful is perfect.
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Thank you, Doree, for expressing your feelings the way you do. I shared your poem and i wrote the word “wonderful”. I wrote “wonderful poetry”. Meaning that this is the real poetry. I know this is deeper. If the word makes you feel uncomfortable, let me know. Thank you, again.
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Doree Melnic : https://outosego.com/2019/09/18/i-would-cry-september-17-2019-doree-melnic/
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The love the word, wonderful. Crying with my mom would be wonderful ❤️. Thank you so much for lifting me up, and hearing my thoughts. It means so much to me.
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You’ re welcome, Doree. Take care, dear.
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