
I stepped over the uprise
Between the out and the in
I came to a surrounding
That hypnotized me
I couldn’t catch my breath
The sound was silence
Stunned into oblivion
It was everything
I couldn’t imagine
All my desires
Of dreams
Had come true
I listened in the illusion
I know it must be
Pinching at my skin
Blinking
Wanting to show myself
I had made it
Wonderful and sublime poem,it’s fascinated me,I love it!!! ♥️
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Thank you 😊❤️
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Your welcome! 🥰 Thank you so much for sharing!!! ♥️♥️
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You are so welcome, and thank you so much for taking the time to tell me what you think 🥰.
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♥️
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Beautiful definitely best thing I have read all day
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Thank you, Lily ♥️
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Beautiful
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♥️ thank you
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“Wanting to show myself I had made it …”
Wonderful, Doree. Thank you.
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Sometimes, it’s funny we can’t see what’s standing right in front of us…thank you so much for your kind words ❤️
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Yes, Doree, it happens often.
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